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PostSubject: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:07 pm

Name: Jouten Ittai

Alias: The Flash Ninja, Lightning's Wrath

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Age: 22

Birth Place: Small village within Lightning Country

Village: Hidden Cloud Village

Rank: Missing Ninja

Personality: Jouten is rather passive than anything. He takes everything that ever upsets him or angers him and bottles it up. He never wants to let it out, afriad of what could happen to others around him. He likes a good joke once in while, but never shows it. A smirk if anything. He is also the type to treat others the way they treat him. He may come of cold and rude, or calm and polite, varying on the situation. Jouten also has a sarcastic and crude sense of humor. It always puts a smirk on his face. When it comes down to battle, Jouten's the type to avoid it. Like mentioned above, Jouten is very passive. He perfers not to battle only because it could result in him losing his temper. If it comes down to it and Jouten is thrown into battle, he is very lazy and unenthused about it. He perfers to throw an excuse rather than a kunai. But if his life is on the line or at risk, his battle perspective changes and takes it seriosuly there throughout. But in a nutshell, Jouten is a passive, sarcastic, lazy, moody kind of guy.

Speacial Characteristics: Jouten has unique yellow eyes. He can also manipulate raw electricity at will. Also has the skill to convert chakra into raw electricity and raw elecricity into chakra.

Clan: Ittai

Clan History: A small bloodline of drunks and brutes within a small village in Lightning Country. There are no major historic achievements or noted accomplishments that this clan has done or accomplished.

Kekkei Genkai: None

Weapons: None

Chakra Element: Lightning, Earth. (Geo-Magnetism)

Speacialties: Elementalist (Main), Ninjutsu (Sub)

History/Background:

Birth Arc:
Jouten was born to a beautiful women in the Hidden Cloud Village. But if only that's how his story could start. Jouten's mother lived in a small village near the outskirts of Lighting Country. At that time, she made a living by delivering mail within the village and its neighbours. She had been specifically picked for that job because of her incredible speed. She had lived alone until she had met Jouten's father. They had met when she was on delivery to an outside village. She had bumped into him and had dropped all her mail. The man helped her up and apologized for his carelessness. He had a rough exterior and a rude attitude, but she knew him better than that after she had gotten to know him.
A year after their first encounter, Jouten's mother had become pregnant. The two were overjoyed. But unfortunately, the happiness in their life was shattered. Jouten's mother was on delivery yet again and had been stopped by what seemed to be a ninja. She didn't know much about them, except for the headband on his forehead. She tried to continue with her work, but the ninja insisted her on staying. He had a devious, mad look on his face. She then resorted to her speed and sprinted away from the ninja. He appeared infront of her and struck her down. He withdrew a kunai and licked it. He whispered inappropriate things to her as she watched him approach in fear.
In a flash, Jouten father appeared and struck the ninja across the head. The ninja flew a few metres away and instantly recovered his posture. Jouten's father and the ninja clashed in battle for the next few minutes. To Jouten's mother, it seemed like years. In the end, the wounded ninja escaped. But Jouten's father laid facedown in the dirt, motionless. Jouten's mother ended up fainting out of shock.

A year has passed since that fateful day, but Jouten's mother remained positive when around her young boy, Jouten Ittai. She had named him after his father. Friends of Jouten's mother helped her out and took care of her as she raised little Jouten. But this is not where Jouten was born. He was born within the Hidden Cloud Village. His mother was not able to get the required help for the birth in her little village and had stayed in an inn a few months prior to his birth. A few months after his birth, she returned to her village, a proud mother.
When he reached the age of 16, Jouten had the appearance of his father, or so his mother thought. He never knew his father and was a little upset. But he never let his emotions show, either. Anyways, his mother decided that there are terrible people out in the world and wished for Jouten to be protected. Or at least able to protect himself. She had enrolled him at the nearest ninja academy. That was the one in the Hidden Cloud Village. She had sprinted there with her son at her side, keeping pace. She was proud that he had been able to inherit the ability of her speed. He had helped her on some of the deliveries she went on and learn to keep pace.
Once they reached the village, she was already in tears. She knew she'd have to leave him here alone to continue with the training. Jouten understood that his mother couldn't possibly afford to live in the village. But he comforted her with quirky comments and reasons for her to go back. He had also inherited his fathers attitude and social skills. She laughed and kissed him goodbye and left. A Jounin of the village showed him where in the village he will stay and where the academy was. At this point, Jouten wasn't too friendly with the people of the Hidden Cloud yet.

Academy Arc:
During his days in the academy, Jouten stayed quiet and passive, doing only what required him to pass. He spoke with the other students, but overall kept to himself. He felt a little weird around the other students, knowing they were a few years younger than he was. But he didn't care. He needed to learn. He was able to learn the justsus and lessons they taught there fairly easily. But Jouten had something the other students didn't. One teacher saw it and took him aside to personally train him. What Jouten had not realized was his "unique" power. Whenever he got close to anything that used electricity, it would either be drained or blow up. His teacher was a little curious to learn as well, so he helped him control this unknown ability.
As the weeks passed, Jouten trained hard with his teacher, who he now called Sensei. Over the weeks, Jouten had learn the basic academy requirements, as well as his own unique abilities. He was now able to use his unique ability to manipulate electricity. He was able to absorb electricity and his body would convert it into chakra. This also worked the other way around, as he could change his chakra into electricity.
The academy's graduation came around and Jouten passed with flying colors. His Sensei was proud to hand him his new headband, which Jouten wore proudly. He was now a Cloud Genin.

Genin Arc:
It was the day after the graduation and Jouten had met two other young shinobi. These were to be his teammates as of that day on. A few minutes later, the teammates were now aquainted. Just as the finished laughing at one of the other kid's joke, their new Sensei appeared. To Jouten's surprise, it was the same Sensei that privately tutored him. Jouten thought this was going to be easy.
The Sensei went over a few rules and guidelines for successful teamwork. After that, they trained for the next 2 weeks, preparing for future missions. Jouten spoke to the others only when it concerned training or missions, but usually kept to himself. The last day of training was rough though. For his teammates at least. The Sensei instructed them to spar with one another to sharpen up their skills. Sadly enough, Jouten had beaten both of them carelessly and easily.
After that, Team 5 had been on and successfully completed all their missions. They had no injuries, nor a scratch. Jouten personally found that boring. He wanted more action and violence. That was his father's recklessness he inherited. Once they completed their 12th successful missions, they were signed up for the upcoming Chuunin Exams. This year, they were being held in Iwa, Earth Country.
The first part of the test was a written one, but they threw a twist on it to make it a little more difficult. Team 5 figured out the little trick and all passed. The second part of the test was a survival activity. The were to travel in a maze of valleys and trentchs in the earth to the end, retrieve a flag, and come back. There were 24 teams, but only 3 flags. This mission could result in death. Jouten had come up with a plan and instructed the others to remain in specified locations unti lthey recieved a signal from Jouten. Jouten, by this time, had improved his already incredible speed. He sped off into the maze as the gates were opened. By the end of the first day, Jouten had reached the 3 flags. His teammates were still halfway through. But they were instructed to not come in any farther. Jouten grabbed all 3 flags and laughed as he placed them and secured them to his back. He then began to sprint all the way back to meet with his teammates.
When he finally met up with his other teammates, one was hardly standing and the other was unconcious. Jouten frowned in disappointment. The one teammate explained what had happened. Apparently, they were attacked by a group from the Grass Village. Jouten laughed and said that Grass ninja were pathetic and that they were even more pathetic for losing to them. Jouten ended up picking up the unconcious teammate and carried him to the gates where it all began. Their team had won the competition flawlessly and no one else qualified. Team 5, the 3 young shinobi, were the only ones to pass. Jouten was now a Chuunin.

Chuunin Arc:
He was applauded by the higher ups for his performance in the Chuunin Exams, but his peers thought is was selfish and greedy. Jouten shrugged off any negative comments. He got the job done and did a little extra. It's not his fault the others failed to get there in time or even take one from him on his way back. Jouten laughed about it.
Jouten's teammates were a little more passive now when it came to battle. Those Grass Ninja sure gave them a shook. One of the teammates stopped focusing on training and started focusing on teaching younger students about battle. The other felt useless when his teamamte was downed and he couldn't help. He took up Medical Ninjutsu. Jouten on the other hand, continued to train himself and learn more about himself. His control over his electricity abilities were improving and he began thinking up new techniques he can call his own. Other jutsus he would learn from other ninja.
Chuunin wasn't all that is was made out to be. Jouten was bored. He went on quests and some were a little more difficult than the Genin quests, but he still managed flawlessly. That is until he heard some of the other Chuunins discussing how to become a Jounin. This caught Jouten's attention. They mentioned something like there is no exam for it, but the Jounins are chosen from the Chuunins by the Raikage. This got Jouten's gears going.
Jouten approached the Raikage's office. He managed to get through security and any other shinobi perfectly. He knocked on the door. The Raikage sounded surprised. "Come in" he said. Jouten opened the door. The Raikage was greatly surprised to see a young Chuunin come in. Alone. "What brings you here, young one?" Jouten smirked. "I'm not so young, but in comparison to yourself, then you may have a point." The Raikage laughed. He then disappeared and reappeared behind Jouten. To the Raikage's surprise, Jouten was standing behind the Raikage. "Oh" said the Raikage, intruiged with Jouten's speed and stealth. "You may be quicker in comparison to me and my old age, but power is still in my advantage." Jouten looked down at the floor, disappointed. "I know."
Since that day, the Raikage had his eye out on Jouten. That was Jouten's plan all along. A few more flawless missions, and the Raikage would have notice him and want his skills. As to Jouten's prediction, just 3 more missions later, the Raikage spoke privately with Jouten and assigned him his Jounin rank. Jouten smiled proudly. He was now a Jounin.

Jounin Arc:
Jounin was much more excited... and violent. Jouten was now assigned more difficult missions than ever before, but he loved it. His skills were improving with every mission and when he had time, went to the side to train his unique techniques. By this time, he had also been taught a few things by the Raikage himself. Jouten felt unstoppable.
Jouten was assigned a mission with 3 other Jounin. One being his childhood Sensei. But one dreadful day, tragedy fell upon Jouten and his teammates. It was a mission to Earth Country, to retrieve stolen papers from Kumo's library. No one knew how the intruder got in and out, but he was warned to be a deadly threat. Jouten licked his lips as he heard those words. But that was Jouten's weakness. He was too cocky and overconfident. The mission seemed to be going as planned, until the group got ambushed. Now, the enemy ninja were no threat, but Jouten was. The other Jounin seemed to be handling themselves fine, so Jouten turned his attention to one of the ambushers. Jouten was stabbed in the arm without even noticing. When the pain struck, Jouten went pale. He had not been physically injured.. ever. This was a new feeling he was feeling. Pain.
His eyes grew large with anger and anguish and he lost his temper. He tried using his new techniques, but he lost control over his lightning. He used to much force and power and it resulted in the entire area being destroyed. After the smoke cleared, Jouten had calmed himself down. He went to the ninja who had stabbed him and searched him. Bingo. He had retrieved the papers and put them away. As he turned around to assemble his team to leave, the other 2 Jounin were trying to help Jouten's former Sensei. Jouten walked over. The Medic Ninja wasn't able to do anything. His Sensei had suffered 3rd degree burns and his nervous system was destroyed. He died moments later. The other 2 Jounin said a little prayer and picked him up and began to head back to Kumo. Jouten stood there. Blank expression. He knew he was the one that did this. He had killed his former Sensei. His closest thing to a friend. A single tear ran down his face and he wiped it. His face still emotionless. He headed back to Kumo.
A funeral was held for the Sensei. Jouten still remained, unemotional the entire time. For the next 2 years, Jouten stopped going out on missions and reamined in the mountains of Kumo to train and control his abilities. He still has not returned and has been deemed as a Missing Ninja. No one knows of his true intentions anymore.

Missing Ninja Arc: (Present Day)


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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Tue Oct 14, 2008 11:15 pm

Jutsus:

((Anything listed with "*" is a custom jutsu.))

Lightning Based:

*Conversion:
A unique ability Jouten was born with. He did not develop it until a later age. The user can focus on changing any chakra in or around the body into electrical energy. This also works by turning electricity into chakra.
Rank: D-S (Varies on user)
Range: -
Type: Supplementary

*Flash Step: The user moves at incredible speed, unseen to the normal eye. This is done so by focusing chakra to all parts of the body and converting it into electricity. Jouten then can travel through the electrons in the air.
Character Use: Jouten Ittai
Rank: A
Range: -
Type: Supplementary

*Thunder Palm: User preforms handseals. User then focuses chakra into the palm of their hand (hand is clenched into a fist at this point), and chakra is converted into electricity. User then charges at target and before contact, opens fist and smashes palm into the target.
Character Use: Jouten Ittai
Rank: B+
Range: 0.5m
Type: Attack

*Thunder Wave: User performs handseals. Chakra is focused and then converted into electricity in the arm. The user then swings his arm (As if trying to uppercut someone) and releases the electricity into the ground towards the target. The attack travels in a straight line.
Character Use: Jouten Ittai
Rank: C+
Range: 5m - 30m
Type: Attack

*Static Current: User collects chakra into the hands and then places them on the ground, facing the target. User then releases the stored, converted chakra into the ground and towards the target. The current is unseen and when reaches the opponent, the opponent is then paralyzed. Technique is cancelled if user removes hands off the ground.
Character Use: Jouten Ittai
Rank: B
Range: Up to 25m
Type: Defence

*Flash Weaponery: User forms hands to hold a desired weapon. User then focuses chakra and converts it into electricity. The electricity then takes shape of the desired weapon. Cannot create projectiles.
Character Use: Jouten Ittai
Rank: A
Range: Varies on weapon.
Type: Supplementary

*Elemental Strike: User can only use this attack twice per day. User hold his hand out and focuses on the surrounding electrons in the vicinity, bringing them close together to one another. Once close enough to the enemy, user brings all the electrons together to clash and make it seem like a bolt of lighting out of thin air. Uses incredible amounts of chakra. Used more than twice a day and damage to chakra system may become severe.
Character Use: Jouten Ittai
Rank: S
Range: 60m radius
Type: Attack

*Distant Thunder Kick: Whenever the user thrusts a kick towards an opponent and misses, the kick will be followed by a wave of thunder (unseen energy) that will force the opponent to lose balance or fall over (no serious damage is done by this).
Character Use: Taijutsu users with lighting element
Rank: B
Range: 15m
Type: Attack

*Dance of Lightning: User focuses chakra into hands and slams them on the ground before them. Chakra is converted into electricity on contact and is sent forward in a 90 degree span. The lighting dances forward, tearing apart the floor and electricuting any opponents who stand in it's way.
Rank: B
Range: Up to 100m
Type: Attack

Thousand Birds Current: Instead of merely focusing the electrical force to his body, the user is able to extend it outside of his body and through objects which he is holding. This allows him to create a protective zone around his person. This zone of electricity can shock and immobilize his foes, presumably by attacking their nervous system.
Rank: A
Range: Close 0m - 5m
Type: Attack

*Lightning Vortex: After using the proper handseals, the user can expel lightning from their palms and target the ground beneath their opponent. Once the lightning makes contact with the ground, it shoots upwards around the target, twisting and contorting counter-clockwise resembling a tornado.
Rank: A
Range: 30m, the attack only uses a 5m radius itself.
Type: Attack

*Impulse: If Jouten makes contact by placing his entire hand on his opponent, he may push his lightning element chakra into his opponent to disrupt the nervous system. The nervous system runs on electric impulses and Jouten may bring that to a stop or manipulate his opponent's movements. Once contact is separated, the technique is cancelled out.
Rank: S
Range: 0.5m
Type: Attack/Supplementary


Earth Based:

*Earthen Fist: The user focuses chakra to their hands and then plunges them into the ground. When the fists are pulled back out, they are surrounded in a a thin, yet powerful armor of stone. If the user loses focus, the stone armor will fall apart.
Character Use: Taijutsu users with earth element
Rank: C+
Range: 0.5m
Type: Supplementary

*Shatter Kick: The user focuses great amounts of chakra into their entire leg. The user jumps into the air (can only be performed while user is in mid-air) and brings his leg down with great force. The result is all the stored chakra within the leg is released on impact. The con about this technique is that if the user contacts anything, the chakra is released.
Character Use: Taijutsu specialists
Rank: A
Range: 1m
Type: Attack

Mud Overturn: Mud Overturn is a defensive Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Earth Element. After striking the ground with their hands, a large wall of earth will rise into place as defense. The defense is not perfect though, a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall.
Rank: B
Range: 0.5m
Type: Defence

*Charged Earth Needles: Once the user has used Mud Overturn, the user focuses chakra into their hand and slams their palm into the back of the wall. On the other side, the wall will shoot out 2ft at a high speed towards the opponent.
Rank: B
Range: Will reach up to 50m
Type: Attack

*Earth Lighting Needles: The user will concentrate chakra into the earth and then release. This will have the user's chakra run through the radius of the user and sprout 8ft tall needles out of the earth. These needles, or rods, can be used to multiply the attack power of lightning based attacks or used to create a energy barrier.
Rank: A
Range: 50m radius
Type: Attack/Supplementary



Geo-Magnestism Based:

*Magnet Sphere: User performs handseals. User then focuses chakra into both hands, converting it into electricity. User then claps hands together and holds while releasing chakra from point of impact. The energy expands into a sphere around the user. The sphere of energy now defends the user from most physical attacks and repels all steel weapons, such as kunai and swords (The sphere of energy acts as a magnet and repels the steel).
Character Use: Jouten Ittai
Rank: C+
Range: Expands to 1m around user
Type: Defence

*Magnet Pull:
Another unique ability of Jouten's. If approached by an armed enemy, Jouten can focus on the ground beneath them and pull any steel items, weapons, etc to the ground and hold it. Another variant of the technique, Jouten may hold his hand out and pull any steel weapon towards himself so that he may wield it.
Rank: A
Range: 10m
Type: Defensive/Supplementary

*Earth Juggling: Jouten focuses lightning into his hands and slams them into the ground. Once contact is made, he releases the lightning into the earth. Using the Geo-Magnetism chakra, large chunks of rock rise from the ground and Jouten is able to control their every move.
Rank: A
Range: 75m radius
Type: Attack/Defence/Supplementary
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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:16 pm

Ok everything looks good
Just add to the 'Magnet Pull Jutsu' that you have to keep your hands against the ground to keep them stuck there.

Change and then It will be approved.


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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Wed Oct 15, 2008 7:54 pm

That's the trick to the jutsu. I don't need to. Jouten's capable of expelling electrical energy into the earth to create that magnetic atmosphere thrugh his feet. As long as I remain contact with the earth, I can do so.

If you still want me to change it, then I will.
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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:22 pm

*Bump bump*
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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Fri Oct 17, 2008 9:41 pm

You are a member of the Ittai clan.
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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Sat Oct 18, 2008 5:21 pm

Well, I was going to just let it sit as a last name rather than a clan, but I suppose.
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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Sat Oct 18, 2008 10:08 pm

Your clan is your surname. Even if you are the only living member, you still have a clan.
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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Mon Oct 20, 2008 7:39 pm

Well, I've fixed it a while ago. Hopefully we can clear this up now.
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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Mon Oct 20, 2008 10:03 pm

Approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Thu Oct 30, 2008 7:04 pm

Psst. Is it going to be moved? lolz.
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PostSubject: Re: Jouten Ittai (Remake - Complete)   Thu Oct 30, 2008 7:15 pm

heh hehe srry.wasnt told to move it

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